Thy might think I'm at home so they don’t know my true identity I can be invisible like a ghost. I chose this power because I can go and work for the police as a spy. Spy the people where thy buy the drugs or everything else. I could go where ever I want without paying for it just jump in the plane without paying. It’s a helpful power for police and the FBI. One day in the class last block, no one new that I have that power. I was I the class and the class was boring usually I enjoy them but this one was so boring I slept in the table. In sleep I could not control my power so I made my self disappear and every one was just staring at my table with open eyes and open mouth saying he “Disappeared!!!”
They quick called the police but they looked every where could not find me. When I woke up all the school was shut down for this thing but I somehow saw a open window and went away from it. Went home had something to eat and done. Next day in the school every one was happy to see me
Good start, Bledar. Needs some proofreading. Focus on diction and specific, creative description. Appeal to all five senses. Consider some similes and metaphors.
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